There is the highlighted area where I thought its untrue and the reference it too old and it invalid point since they developed an app and they consistently improving and if you add a bit more to the conclusion and be more clear on what they should instead of being very generic
That’s my only two concerns, Thanks

you can find in the attachment with the Rubric attached and there is a report has been done where you could take some of the information there to use it in this report , for the same company Alnahdi