ello this is a progress check, I will upload the outline and I would like you to make the main points into paragraphs. (its just three body paragraph, no need for conclusion and introduction paragraph)
so for each paragraph its 250-300 words: one sentence main point , 2-3 connecting sentences, 2 evidence , 2 responses for each evidence, 1 concluding sentence. ( everything is in the outline you just have to put the pieces together and create paragraphs.)
Also, some references are not correctly referenced so please fix that, and as for the citation I will upload a video explaining the way to attach the citation https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dKhoDewBqNI&;feature=youtu.be ….. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dml31kiG1Y8&;feature=youtu.be
If you need access to my university online library to download the sources or anything else let me know 🙂
please keep the words and sentences as simple as possible.
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